The world feels off kilter
I’m spinning…..round and round
Every time I lift my head
The snow descends, engulfs me
At times it overwhelms me
And then, bang, down I fall.
Falling, falling, twisting down
How long it takes to reach the ground
Slow motion into blackness
Nothingness
Painless
Floating.
Pain, pain, pain
Why am I on the ground?
A twist here and a bend there
Limbs entangled, joints at angles
Unnatural, except for me
Stretch and snap is the norm.
Salt, water; water, salt
Compression to limbs.
Like an autumn leaf
I fall and break
My body fragile, unstable
Just another day with EDS and POTS.
Beautiful poem, as someone with EDS and PoTS it really resonated with me thanks for sharing
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Thanks Ella – I am sorry it resonates and the reasons why, but also glad that I have captured it well x
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striking words that I understood. i am so sorry you are going through all this. sending gentle hugs your way………….
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I appreciate this Wendi xxx
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sending healing thoughts…………
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Sorry to hear of your recent “trip”. Here’s wishes for better days.
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Thanks Cherie!
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Oh Claire I really feel for you 💜💜💜
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Thanks Ritu xxx
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“Like an autumn leaf, I fall and break, My body fragile, unstable” – Beautiful words, yet painfully sad, and very poignant in illustrating life with EDS and POTS ♥
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